If you'd like to know about August
I can show you chrysanthemums
Covered with dust, or Rosy Dawn
Coming late and leaving the
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The way you've built up the poem is superb...the flower, the sun to end with august love in your shadows with splashing moments...very nicelycrafted...thanks
This piece is beautifully composed, your choice of select imagery adds impacted to the voice of the speaker...well penned 10
‘How is it, Love, that you Remain so still in my shadow’ ~ Stoic Unspoken Love is fathomlessly deep…looms inside ...Masterly chiseled with nuggets of metaphors … thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10