Tuesday, July 14, 2009

About August Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you'd like to know about August
I can show you chrysanthemums
Covered with dust, or Rosy Dawn
Coming late and leaving the
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 August 2010

‘How is it, Love, that you Remain so still in my shadow’ ~ Stoic Unspoken Love is fathomlessly deep…looms inside ...Masterly chiseled with nuggets of metaphors … thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Indira Renganathan 13 August 2009

The way you've built up the poem is superb...the flower, the sun to end with august love in your shadows with splashing moments...very nicelycrafted...thanks

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Theodora Onken 14 July 2009

Simply exquisite write. Enjoyed tremendously, Theo

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~ Jon London ~ 14 July 2009

This piece is beautifully composed, your choice of select imagery adds impacted to the voice of the speaker...well penned 10

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