About A Heavenly Story Comments

i think i will agree to the comment of mr noel horlanda

Good wordplay! I like it

heavnely indeed...! 10!

well, this is a nice poem well done but a little bit short short and sweet!

no story there; well 'you said only about'...good word play there Obinna...cleverly written piece...10

hey liked the rhymes very musical..nice short and sweet verse indeed... thanks for this one 10++

Makes the mind feel hoary, Lets hope the mind becomes more seasoned like a ripe fruit waitig to be picked. Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

Again this is nicely written, flawless, and nicely calculated rhythm and a tint of imagery. thanks...