Their little hearts beat
Inside of their mother
Tiny hands and feet
You kill one after another
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very deep and very passionate. a sensitive subject for most you convey your feelings and beliefs very well. nice work
a very good poem filled with sensitive emotions..... leaves a good question to ponder on... beautiful work.....
This is a wonderful argument against abortion. Great emotion.
powerful poem! you clearly show the brutality and evil of abortion. I wish that people knew what they were doing before they make the choice to kill their child.
i do agree with your poem and its very sad. but some times i do belive people should have abortions if death is involved for the mother. good poem though :)
I really liked this poem. It's sad and sends a good message. It breaks my heart when people do this to their children.
i agree with your peom it is really good. i do not believe in abortions
AVery good message to the public, But nobody Heard our cry dear Author, Thanks for the poem, Best wishes
Great poem. ABORTION IS MURDER! ! ! ! It is unbelieveable that people can think that murder is a terrible tragedy, yet say that they are 100% fune about killing an unborn baby. The moment a baby is concieved, even when it is just starting to developr, it is a baby. Those who perform abortions and those who consent to have abortion are murderers. That's all there is to it!
Your strong views are very evident in this excellent poem. Although personally I don't view the procedure as wrong. I worry much more about the prolific breeding or our species, and the consequent burden on our planet and animals. This is another very enjoyable write from you though, well done.
The message is loud and clear. Keep on humanizing the people.8
A touchy and nice work....puts a message across very strongly...Keep writing Fahim
Love it! ! ! ! You almost made me shed a tear, no lie. I had an experience with this subject before. Im pro-life but the ex had no repsect. 'who will cry for the child inside of you, who? ' <-awesome. well said and i can feel your emotions from this beautiful piece. cause life is beautiful.
Albright's this poem is having relevance of the period pertaining to abortion which he sees as wrong and it is very beautiful.