Sunday, August 31, 2008

Abortion Comments

Rating: 4.3

Their little hearts beat
Inside of their mother
Tiny hands and feet
You kill one after another
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Whitney Nicole Albright*
COMMENTS

Albright's this poem is having relevance of the period pertaining to abortion which he sees as wrong and it is very beautiful.

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Keith Hendrickson 21 September 2009

very deep and very passionate. a sensitive subject for most you convey your feelings and beliefs very well. nice work

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Shekhar Joshi 01 June 2009

a very good poem filled with sensitive emotions..... leaves a good question to ponder on... beautiful work.....

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Greg Oosterhouse 20 May 2009

This is a wonderful argument against abortion. Great emotion.

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Julia Wakeman 25 February 2009

powerful poem! you clearly show the brutality and evil of abortion. I wish that people knew what they were doing before they make the choice to kill their child.

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Desiree Burdick 11 January 2009

i do agree with your poem and its very sad. but some times i do belive people should have abortions if death is involved for the mother. good poem though :)

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Chocolate Bunny 01 January 2009

I really liked this poem. It's sad and sends a good message. It breaks my heart when people do this to their children.

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Bobbie Mcnay 30 December 2008

i agree with your peom it is really good. i do not believe in abortions

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Vinod Kumar 28 December 2008

AVery good message to the public, But nobody Heard our cry dear Author, Thanks for the poem, Best wishes

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Paige S 15 December 2008

Great poem. ABORTION IS MURDER! ! ! ! It is unbelieveable that people can think that murder is a terrible tragedy, yet say that they are 100% fune about killing an unborn baby. The moment a baby is concieved, even when it is just starting to developr, it is a baby. Those who perform abortions and those who consent to have abortion are murderers. That's all there is to it!

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Norma Southwood 08 October 2008

Your strong views are very evident in this excellent poem. Although personally I don't view the procedure as wrong. I worry much more about the prolific breeding or our species, and the consequent burden on our planet and animals. This is another very enjoyable write from you though, well done.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 October 2008

kudos to u for having written on such a sensitive issue

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Asif Andalib 25 September 2008

The message is loud and clear. Keep on humanizing the people.8

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Fahim Sayed 31 August 2008

A touchy and nice work....puts a message across very strongly...Keep writing Fahim

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Dave Shmave83 31 August 2008

Love it! ! ! ! You almost made me shed a tear, no lie. I had an experience with this subject before. Im pro-life but the ex had no repsect. 'who will cry for the child inside of you, who? ' <-awesome. well said and i can feel your emotions from this beautiful piece. cause life is beautiful.

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