Wednesday, January 16, 2019

Aborted Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swimming in a lake of pure gold
Doesn't matter when there's no passion to hold.

Although his pockets seem bottomless,
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Practicing Poetess 21 January 2019

Beautifully, expressively written, and accurately conveyed his sorrow and agony. I'm conservative when it comes to rating, but this one deserves, and will be awarded, a 10!

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 January 2019

Very impressive write, Christa Rod. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Christa D 17 January 2019

Thanks a lot! I will read your poem.

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