Sunday, October 14, 2007

Aboriginie Comments

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He is an aboriginie,
Listening to the the music
Of the forest, of twittering
Birds, houling monkeys,
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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL
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David Desantis 24 April 2008

very descriptive poem. I felt very connected to nature w/ this one, and could really imagine a life as an aboriginie for a minute. It almost seems like it might be easier to just lose all attachments to the world and go back to our roots of nature. Great job, check out my stuff if you get a chance

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Ray Lucero 14 October 2007

Ravi, Nice snapshot of aboriginal life...but found spelling typos distracting. Peace, Ray

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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Trissur, Kerala State, India.
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