Wednesday, June 17, 2009

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Rating: 2.6

I have been living a lie,
A bit of me each day dies…

I have been living in denial,
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Mamta Agarwal
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Surya . 30 June 2009

yearning for the divine. i like this poem voted10 surya

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Sameer Ahmed 26 June 2009

Wonderful poem, almost at the verge of confessions......Less travelled road reminds Robert Frost.........10/10.

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Sandra Fowler 18 June 2009

Beautiful poem, Mamta. You have the spirit and the courage to make it all the way.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 June 2009

'Once you take less travelled road, You discover, are alone aboard… That’s when you surrender He alone is your anchor.' A nice poem with nice idea. Thoughts provoking.10+++

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Saadat Tahir 17 June 2009

i see a convergence of the surreal devine and the mundane earthly very well written mamta did it again cheers

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S Dey 17 June 2009

Hi Mamta! Nice poem indeed.... Beautifully expressed a bit of life in verses.10++ for you. Will you please oblige me by reading my poems? Specially 'Porous Nights'. Regards. S. Dey.

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premji premji 17 June 2009

revelation........... one of your finest poems mamtaji.......... it is easy to travel through highways......... very difficult on untrodden paths.........

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