Able To Face The Storms In The Race Comments

Waooo! Amazig poem :)

A nice poem with a good flow and a strong determination to go beyond all hardships...

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: ****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.. (((((((SiLenCe))))))) To: Ian Bowen Date-Time: 11/18/2009 7: 55: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: scusi mua - what do you mean by you know it is me..pardon me do you think iam free for all of you..iam a young lady who has other thing to think about..iam not old as you to set here and play non sense... Why should my age matter?

it does feel like we climb mountains and back to base, but i am believing that those mountains are removed and cast into the sea,

A nice piece with a good flow.

marvelous and heartfelt piece of writing..10/10

very poetic! .........................

This poem is like a dropp of incense on red charcoal all senses are involved. You know what I mean…

Fantastic poem! ! ....marvelous poem! ! thanks for sharing your valuable thoughts, , ,10s

the poem is written quite and fast like a shot. good work Tamara. life is short, time is fast was right noticed. for that reason we so much need to command our lives without fatal mistakes

amazing poem, excellent one, keep up the good job

Life is short Time is fast the best lines of all....great thinking!

Hi, After reading this, i could catch another answer of 'what does life mean? ' such a great description about life, yes. we should be able to face the greatest storm, either. thanks for sharing>>

Praise for your warm, brave spirit. Inspiring write. Kind wishes, Sandra

Tamara, with peace replace, if only every thought of man could be replaced with a thought of peace. Bob 10++

A melody blended with intellectual description, and to the point......it is greatly penned..........

short but to the point. nicely put

interesting verses....a meaningful one....

Wow fanastic job great imagation 10+++ keep wht u do

Great poem Tamara! well written, imaginative metaphors with thought provoking meaning. some great lines that ring all too true. Life is short Time is fast we live in haste What legacy do we leave as time waxes and wains Have we remembered in our short lives To give reverence to the important things Were we selfish or kind Our wrongs in life did we try to change Did we learn to recognize a persons worth Not through how different they are but by how similar we are How will the world remember us when we're gone Great job! you know you have my vote 10+++ Jen