Thursday, October 2, 2014

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Once there was an elder who possessed a fortune vast.
He was the proprietor of lands he had amassed,
dwellings and retainers and a mansion huge and wide
but with just a single doorway to depart outside.
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 02 October 2014

Yet the house symbolizes our living ding realm, beautifully written long lovely poem. Each stanza expresses deep essence of feeling and draws reality. Nice ever.

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Harley White 02 October 2017

Thank you very much for reading this long poem and for your gratifying remarks!

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