Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Ability To Carry Awareness Comments

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Sometimes my mind turns into a dragonfly
hovering over the waters of reality, a glow-
worm with its inner light extinguished
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Margaret Alice
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Barbara Terry 27 January 2009

These words I feel are the what makes the whole poem work. I can’t rekindle the flames of interest by remaining within the borders of sensory objects, I have to spread mental wings and take off When we spread our mental wings and take off, then we have the courage and strength to have the ability to carry awareness, not just for ouselves but for everything and everyone around us. This is a well written poem with a very strong message. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Joseph Poewhit 27 January 2009

Looking at reality can take courage at times.

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Margaret Alice

Margaret Alice

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