Ability-2 Comments

Ma'am very well penned. This is what always happen. Women always bow and obey only for good but when it comes for me they never never do.

A great poem well crafted and presented.

A great woman and mother will sacrifice everything for the sake of her children even her happiness and comfort.

Great a poem. I wrote a comment lengthier than 300 words and is deleted by PH! good to read you Indra ji.

On decision of no divorce Her silent angst but to settle An occupation and destination Permanent for herself......//// thoughtfully delineated the social dignity and grievance of nowadays woman......//

On decision of no divorce Her silent angst but to settle An occupation and destination Permanent for herself -This is one of your best poems! A great pleasure reading it time and again! Stay always blessed dear madam!

In poem Ability-2 the ablities of Jansi Rani have been touchingly expressed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

it's my great pleasure revisiting this beautiful poem! This time I like to quote, 'And her vagabond hubby... A regular sunday-visitor/Hosteling to relish her......Thanks dear madam for sharing! Pray God fetch you peace and happiness at every moment of your life! ................(Dillip)

A great poem! I cannot put it in words dear madam! Just I would lie to quote: 'Jansi Rani'(I call her so) / lever silence is composed/For her daughters, for their marriage/So not to break her own wedlock”. I express my sincere appreciation for producing such a marvelous piece! May god shower on you tons of happiness!

Life is itself a compromise, parents who reall y love their children have no alternate but to continue as sposes, whatever the circumstances may be.

Her clever silence is composed! Nice work.

That's being Clever.... than Courageous An intelligent look into History and Current Surely reveals whats there in store and not to hop The one who can adjust in the given carpet Surely to reap enough yeild. Better to be aside the fire pan Than being fried on an open ground At summer, fire irritates At winter it warms up Cool thoughts.... I don't know... how many agree... But... is a simple fact. Good subject... good read.

A salute to ur honest feeling & to the poet for a truthful poetry blended with real & reel life....10+++

'Jansi Rani'(I call her so) .. Her clever silence is composed For her daughters, for their marriage So not to break her own wedlock.......thoughit makes their postionvulnerable still she hold her positionhighandhold inhigh esteem..we all know it but it is her sacrifice all thetime... graeat salure to ur poem dear.....10 read mine.........makes me bleed.........i may not withdraw

candid truths expressed in this verse. The state of affairs in many a Indian home. Thanks for posting.

A sad but true tale about the fate of several women in our country Indira....well told

story of every other indian wife...one such success story i know is of a mother who held on till the daughter's marriage and at the same pandaal declared to the husband before everyone that she has no more to do with him...

true meaningful poem, the same story of many wives around the globe...well said

i am able to imagine the circumstances that made a 'Queen of Janzi' out of an ordinary house wife...this work complimentingto your Ability-1 i think...10

really sad such relationships also should continue...though all other relationships are not breakable by law..this relationship between husband and wife is the most creative in life..so sad it should continue as a responsibility...this does not truly nurture the children....a thought provoking poem mam...10