Friday, June 8, 2007

Abilities Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat next to a blind young man
His hands upon a coffee cup and cane
The train lurched through the morning air
Sunlight danced across his face
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Frank Bana
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Original Unknown Girl 11 June 2007

Frank, there is so much perception in this piece, I love how you wrap it up at the end with a little slice of humour..... we are so very lucky to have all of our senses are we not? HG: -) xx

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