Wednesday, February 3, 2010
Abiding Comments
Rating: ★4.0
Waiting for a day that will never arrive,
Living a dream - keeping alive.
'Time' is so perfect, somewhere in space.
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Kari Alexander
03 February 2010
Wonderful work with a strong message. 'Falling from this world where would I land/Within his Grace or struggling quicksand? ' - beautiful image of an inner battle. And the rhyme was great, not tacky at all.
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7/21/2025 9:34:33 AM # 1.0.0
I love your poetry and the way it is written really speaks in more ways than one. Beautiful.