Abhra Comments

Good to the Core! Excellent!

good use of the cloud metaphor...i liked the expression 'An inch of the cloud I placed on my bed'...artful write...10

You certainly paint a cloud with a silver lining of comfort in the comfort zone with a touch of spice to make your next mornings nice +++10 for the orginality regard

An exemplary example of superbly placing the metaphors with rare imagery.The theme itself is out of the blue.The diction have a certain connotation in the context which can only be traced with good imagination.An excellent piece of work.

beautiful... reshama... doc i love yer poems....why they are so different from mine i cd try a thousand years and not cm up anything resemblig this its beautifully put the deep meaning the alligory the musicality....wow.. cheers and yer ten that u rtly deserve