Thursday, September 14, 2006

Aber Falls Comments

Rating: 4.8

It starts high up in the mountains
Coming down as a rivulet
Till it reaches the granite wall
And comes over the lip
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

Great piece of work that you did here. The Aber Falls was also another good title to have used. I'm glad to be reading your poetry.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 18 September 2006

Veil of of the young bride's face caught me too. Picturesque, with some great lines. Great falls, well captured. Patrick

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'A young bride's face' caught for me the innocent/enlightement of this well-crafted piece. t x

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Danny Reynolds 14 September 2006

Nice work Marilyn, covering the falls through the seasons, and how nature changes not only our perception, but the physical properties. Danny

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