Abecedarian To A Dead Mother Comments

this poem, it's a quick read and it covers a range of things, it allows my emotions to go into the poem and my imagination is applied to it

Very well written. I particularly like the way you enjamb. It brings a gripping pause to my reading and a gasp.

I'd like to thank you for writing about a lousy mother and (especially) not getting all sentimental and taking back the bitter at the end. I wish I had been so bold.