Abdullah Bin Ruwahah Comments

if you do what they’ve done then you are rightly guided, we all wish to do wat they did, so we all rightly guided, well write dear

To be honest, I like the second part of the poem rather than the first (first two stanzas) . There's not much to do as a reader with just one word adjectives. That probably could be flushed out more.

a nice one. keep up the good work.

A nice philosophical poem.