Wednesday, February 28, 2007

Abduction Comments

Rating: 5.0

No one suspected such a heartfelt sight:
father and child on a lovely summer day,
puffy clouds painting a powder blue sky.
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Alicia Patti
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Chris Mendros 06 March 2007

Once again, vivid imagery makes the poem. Sparing use of adjectives (puffy, wicked) strengthens the contrast between what is seen and what is really going on. Nice work.

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