Once again, vivid imagery makes the poem. Sparing use of adjectives (puffy, wicked) strengthens the contrast between what is seen and what is really going on.
Nice work.
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Once again, vivid imagery makes the poem. Sparing use of adjectives (puffy, wicked) strengthens the contrast between what is seen and what is really going on. Nice work.