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Astonished is what he was as he found he wasn't the only one
Beside himself he felt because he let this happen
Cold shoulder is what he got for his passion
Despair is what he has now
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You've expressed heartache so well, something I think most of us can relate to. And I love what you've done with using the alphabet at the start of each line. One of the things I realy like about your poetry is that you're always willing to try out dfferent styles. Hugs Anna xxx
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7/26/2025 10:04:10 PM # 1.0.0
Like the style, and that it could have but didn't 'force' any of the lines. Well done. -chuck