Abc (C) 5-15-07 Comments

congrats, you're very talented. keep it rollin'

it's like you picked up the dictionary and arranged all the words alphabetically. it's creative but without any sense or meaning, though i really admire the way you have put them together and some parts do make sense. somethingnew.

You are quite imaginative, inventive, and persistent.

Excellent 10++

Though whole poem is beautiful..........these line is most beautiful of all.........killin' kids killin' kindness killin' kelly's kiss.......a kinda of alliteration...................Good Write........

That poem is ok To me

A mind twister to the final ending

An experimental piece on A, B, ...., Y, & Z. Enjoyed this joy.

great one i love the way you have used evey letter :)