It's only been two weeks,
But I miss you more than I can bare.
My constant companion, my cozy comforter,
I feel you next to me,
I wish I could see,
With your eyes on mine, I felt sublime.
I hope I didn't stretch it, your 19 years offset it
You passed through our hearts, and died in our arms.
We knew that's how it should be,
In the ivy patch lay your bed
As we gently lay your head,
So my retreat gained a friend
And we will never bend,
Loving you dear and feeling so near
Very emotional. Reminicient of Annabel Lee. Meter and rythm very original. Enjoyable but sad. Please write more. Pearl Diamond
The best companion human could have had.......I can feel the agony of loosing someone so precious....like Abby.May the force of Abby be with you Allan.Keep writing my bro Allan.
a sad one but a nice one keep writing and sharing regards anju
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How lovely you describe your grief yet gratitude for the years you had.