Saturday, October 25, 2014

Abandonment's Pain Comments

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Tears falling under midnight skies, scrapping against
the rawness of newly acquired abandonment.

Carelessly gave trust away and have been badly hurt
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 26 October 2014

Isn't it a singular blessing that we have poetry to be the vehicle and container of such thoughts as these. If they were JUST bouncing around inside your head, they could do so much damage to composure, efforts, dreams. As it is, the speaker of the poem has reached her nadir. She is at a threshold of giving up, all that is left is waiting...What comes next will either be more of the same downward movement, or some kind of heart-healing. I can only hope her ordeal is at an end and the healing will begin.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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