Abandonment Comments
Some people say 'Things will get better! ',
As far as I'm concerned my eyes will just get wetter,
The tears that fall are often mis-shed,
At least that's what I think when I lie my head...
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the poem is too good, it touched my heart............ very strong feelings.......... very good language... fab work.... keep going................... best of luck.....................
this makes my heart strings tug, and the simplicity of the poem is powerful.
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7/20/2025 5:04:34 PM # 1.0.0
Intense emotional content, touches the heart completely with it's vivid depiction of abandonment, powerfully etches itself into my mind. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn