Abandoned Windmill Comments
I feel the intensity of your pain,
As I have prayed for years in vain;
For the windmill in my university lane,
Which stands abandoned to be slain.
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it has attracted your attention and has, thus, a purpose...you have found beauty in it
a sad end to this windmill tale....but you do bring her beauty back to life!
a productive thing when kept idle ages faster...lovely narration in this poem
Superb presentation...read my poem on wind mills...and thanks for all your kind comments
Your description of an abandoned windmill is beautiful. They are so treasured no matter how many years they stand or what condition they are in. '10! ' my friend! Warm Wishes, Marilyn
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7/19/2025 10:45:15 AM # 1.0.0
Sad feeling to this poem, but well portrayed. I like it.