'Abandoned Star' Poem by Novice Writer

'Abandoned Star'

Rating: 5.0


As I was lying in my bed,
with nothing but a flickering lamp beside me,
Gazing at the sky through my single window, I felt the emptiness in my heart, As I gazed at the lonely star in the sky. It was without any company, like a person who has been forsaken, By his companions.

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Nice analogy. Liked it.5*

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