Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Abandoned Love Comments

Rating: 3.3

And when was the time twinkling
Years in separation in union nothing
Heart on the sleeve for the youth exuberant
Songs to the senses in autumn the spring
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 25 January 2010

love fizzles..... the idea is excellently penned here. Ur wording is choicest. Best words in best order that is what Coleridge said of a good poem. I may feel tempted to say the same about ur poem...

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masked lady 05 December 2009

Wonderful poem! Well discussed! You deserve 10! More power!

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Kesav Easwaran 23 October 2009

Cupid isn't helpful always...gets bored...and love gets finished off! enjoyed the discussion inside...10

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Ejaz Khan 21 October 2009

A great write.......

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