Tuesday, August 9, 2022

Abandoned Courtyard Comments

Rating: 5.0

Half-shaded in the afternoon
The marbled floor smudged
By the acacia shadow
Awaits the summer breeze
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Nosheen Irfan
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Richard Wlodarski 30 November 2022

Only a true poet/poetess can add visual beauty to an abandoned courtyard...and make the poem sublime. Heartiest of Congrats on such a very well deserved POD, Nosheen!

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David Wood 28 November 2022

Just superb Norsheen. Top matks…

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Savita Tyagi 28 November 2022

Marvelous poem. Silence sweeps the yard with force of hurricane….so happy to read it as member poem on front page.

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This poem is the POD Member today. This poem, sure, deserves the honour. Actually, PoemHunter is honoured by featuring this gem!

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One of the best poems of Nosheen. One of the best I have ever read!

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Superb poem. The mood of a lost ‘world' created most emphatically and effectively. The flow of metaphors and tropes makes the elegantly powerful. Truly Nosheenic. Loved it. Top score and myfav

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Sandra Feldman 28 November 2022

Carried away by the poetic and perfect pictorial sentiments in tour description. Even, an abandoned courtyard becomes alive come from such a talented pen and poetic transmission. Well deserved poem of te day, sincere congratulations.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2022

A well crafted poem with crystalline images.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2022

'Silence sweeps the yard', wonderful words of a beautiful poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 November 2022

For this wonderful poetic creation top score and to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 November 2022

An abandoned courtyard described with such depth and beauty. A marvellous poem that truly deserves the honour of Poem of the day.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 28 November 2022

Trees answer in monosyllables ~ wow just wonderful poetic diction; great enjoyable to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2022

Inadvertent mistake: this wonderful poem. Be indifferent and keep writing. Great future ahead!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2022

A fascinating poem! I am delighted to notice that this wonderful is displayed on the home page today as the Poem of the Day. Many congratulations! !

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 November 2022

Congratulations on POD x Well deseverved with this fine write.

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Anjandev Roy 28 September 2022

Wonderful representation.....thanks for sharing...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2022

Trees answer in monosyllables.... fascinating expression. Appreciated this magnificent poem. Top score!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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