Tuesday, December 13, 2005

Abandoned By Life Comments

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I have been abandoned in my life
and although I strive
to make a relationship work
I cannot forgive a mistake made
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Jordan Antrim
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Stuart Mason 13 December 2005

I like the irregular rhythmn and the rhymes and half rhymes, they work well.

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Jordan Antrim

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