Friday, March 14, 2014

Abandoned Comments

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A door slams:
An echo fills the air –
This once busy sales floor
Is now completely bare.
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Angela Wybrow
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Colleen Courtney 14 March 2014

Wonderful poem! Brought back memories of when I was a child and every Tuesday on my Dad's day off, him, myself and my Mom always had lunch at the Woolworths lunch counter. Thank you for bringing back a precious memory!

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Chuy Amante 14 March 2014

Brilliant writing! I love the style and the moral was good too! thanks

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Bill Cantrell 14 March 2014

A true to life poem that rhymes with reality and that is very well crafted, thanks for posting.

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Angela Wybrow

Angela Wybrow

Salisbury, Wilts, UK
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