Saturday, May 16, 2009

Abandoned Comments

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Abandoned on the streets so cold
hurt and lonely no one to hold
my only warmth from this white dove
a solitary being that shows me love
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Teresa Reck
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Sydney Bell 29 April 2012

Knowing what has happened and not being able to do anything about it...feeling so hopeless and alone

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

is there anyone about who gives a care or are they as cold as the icy air hi teresa as chilly as the frost from siberia...great lines very well written cheers

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