Saturday, May 31, 2008

Abandoned Comments

Rating: 4.8

ever since i was three
i’ve always wanted to be free
NO! NO! NO!
mom used to say
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Greenwolfe 1962 31 May 2008

I really can't use conventional language to comment on this poem. I'm not going to say its a great poem. But I am going to say that its worth more than a great poem to me. That's because I'm a man and my mother is dead. Those are the only two facts that matter. GW62

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M.A. C. 31 May 2008

OMG....what a poem.....I could feel your feelings....it definitely touched me.....it's going to my poem list....10/10.....nice write

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