Friday, April 3, 2009

Abandonded Comments

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You abandoned me on this cold, dark road.
Now I go every day all alone.
Not a single thing I own.
I couldn't take it I fell to my knees.
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Monkey Bubbles
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~ Jon London ~ 03 April 2009

Raw emotion pours down the page, select words give this a deep impact. Nice work

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Monkey Bubbles 03 April 2009

is that a good thing or a bad thing?

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Joseph Poewhit 03 April 2009

Get that lost feeling from the words.

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