Sunday, July 15, 2012

Abandon Those Juggled Balls Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a thin and fine line,
Between this and that...
Which is not finitely defined.
And easily snapped!
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 July 2012

As expected, Lawrence Sir, You have penned down this poem, but juggling is the great act and we have to be well focused not to lose a ball, an idea, a vision and the determination. Good and you are great in your balanced, but stubborn thoughts! 10 marks.

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