Koi khawab na aysa dikhana tum,
koi saz na aysa bajana tum,
koi geet na aysa gana tum,
zara chupke chupke aana tum,
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boht khoob... beautifully written with the quill dipped in dark leanings... the poet has captured the emotions very well indeed liked
bahuth khoob...dil ki udaasi ka izhar e bayan bakhoobhi nibhaya hai......
zindagi me kuchh pal aise bhee aate hain jab ummeed ka daaman hath se nikal jaata hai aur ham saare jhamele se door chale jaana chaahte hain. us waqt ham tanha rahna chahte hai. Quote: main dukhi hoon mujhko rone do /... mere sar mein khala si lagti hay / yeh aurat jeeti marti hay / beemar hoon main so jaoon gi / ab door kahin kho jaoon gi!
Nazm umda hai.Aur Insha-Allah tabiyat bhi achhi hogi, Allah aapko sehat se nawaze taake aap achchi achchi nazm aur ghazal hamare sath share kare..Aamin.
Ek Mutasirkun nazm hay lekin kaun kafir aap ko jane de ga. Aap akele to na ja paengi.
A great ars poetica, Bano. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks