Wednesday, August 22, 2012

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Pairon ki bediyan khaabon ko baandhein nahi re, kabhi nahi re
Mitti ki paraton ko nanhe se ankur bhi cheerein, dheere dheere
Iraade hare bhare jinke seenon mein ghar karein
woh dil ki sunein karein, na darein
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sagar patil.
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Farah Ilyas 02 June 2013

Wao you wrote in Urdu Language in such an impressive way..well done

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Shahzia Batool 04 May 2013

the poem shows a vast imaginative horizon: Subha ki kirnon ko rokein jo salakhein hain kahan jo khayalon pe pehre daalein woh aankhein hain kahan Par khulne ki deri hai parinde ud ke choomenge aasman, aasman, aasman well-written! ! !

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Payal Parande 22 August 2012

so beautiful and truth from the delicate heart of yours......a splendid write like always i love it, thanks for sharing, love, payal

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Lalit Kumar Deb 22 August 2012

I have read all the poems. They are reflections of strong emotional feelings.

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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