Aayee Hoon Nidamat Ke Rida Orh Ke Ser Per! Comments

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Made a revisit today. Enjoyed reading again. Thank You, Aarzoo. But where are your new poems?

This is absolutely brilliant.....I like this wonderful composition sooooooo much! Top score and to my favorite.

Bahuth badhiya kaha aap ne., excellent.,

Corrigendum to my comment below: : -) the arrangement of stanzas..... Everything has done so smoothly........x Everything has been done so smoothly...

Hi Aarzoo, Yet another beautiful poem-a sher! Eeman se poonoor kiya aapne har dil Bhatke hue qadmon ko bhee le aaya dagar per........ Jannat ka sa mahaul nazar aata hein khar per Beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading; As usual, you are being philosophical, touching the heart of the reader. Keep it up.

I am really a foreigner so far as the hindi is concerned....... But the arra.ngement stangas of 2linedd..the sweet rhyming..... ..THE PHOTOTO ATTACHED.... ..everything has done so smoothly and artistically with similarity That your poem seems as if: ......a glass of tender and perfumed wind from jannat not to drink but to breathe to increase the vivacity of life.... Keep presenting...Alla will help you......dua hamari taraf se.

Masha Allah.......Kya khoob Naath hai.....Allah aapki ye muraad puri kare Aameen.....Dili Dua'ayen aur Alf Daad.... Mujhe mera ek sher yaad aagay.... . Khus naseeb hain wo jo un nazaron ka deedaar karte hain Jo khamosh hokar bhi apna izhaar karte hain Hamare Nanajaan ka ek sher hai... Mai yeh samjhunga ke ankhen bhi hui thi paida Jab Madina mere ankhon ke muqabil hoga Jaane kis roz wo rauze ki ziyaarat hogi.....