Sunday, June 30, 2013

Aawara Badal (The Vagabond Cloud) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Aasman saaf nazar aa raha hai
chand badal k tukre umar-ghumar rahe hain
unhe talaash hai us prishthbhumi ki
jo sadiyon se banjar pare hain
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ramesh rai
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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 08 September 2013

Good. You have a talent for such short pieces. Keep writing till you become a Real Master!

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 July 2013

Fantastic...beautiful write.

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2013

Monsoon ushers in here.Nice poem.

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Shahzia Batool 30 June 2013

Such is the Divine kindness seeking for the deserving, so nice in both the languages!

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Wahab Abdul 30 June 2013

its a nice poem... i love it to read.... i also have written some Hindi poems....cheers

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