Aasman saaf nazar aa raha hai
chand badal k tukre umar-ghumar rahe hain
unhe talaash hai us prishthbhumi ki
jo sadiyon se banjar pare hain
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Such is the Divine kindness seeking for the deserving, so nice in both the languages!
its a nice poem... i love it to read.... i also have written some Hindi poems....cheers
Good. You have a talent for such short pieces. Keep writing till you become a Real Master!