Shabnam se dil ki aag bujhane chala hoon main,
Aangan mein khud ko aaj sulane chala hoon main.
Sargoshian karoon ga sitaron se rat bhar,
Thandi hawa ko geet sunane chala hoon main.
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Aapki kavita bahuth khoobsurat hai. Woh subh ke bad jane kahan ja ke so gai, Dekhi jo ek jhalak to jagane chala hoon main....Really beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it.
Gustakhion pe meri woh naraz ho gayee, Aashiq hoon main bhi usko manane chala hoon main. Woh subh ke bad jane kahan ja ke so gai, Dekhi jo ek jhalak to manane chala hoon main. so beautiful! ! straight from your heart... just like your other poems! ! i liked it! !
Sir, Thanks for your encouraging comments. This lovely poem expressing love for nature is beautiful and sweet.
Sargoshian karoon ga sitaron se rat bhar, Great Ghazal with a beautiful imagery and sweet, flawless flow. Thanks. A quote: Thandi hawa ko geet sunane chala hoon main. Dosheezgiye laila ke israr ki quasam, Fitrat ko belibas banane chala hoon main.