Monday, October 7, 2019

Aakhiri Khwahish (Urdu) Comments

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Aaj chalta hun teri mehfil se, aaj to poochh le miri khwahish.
Marne wale ki or kya hogi? Marne wale ki zindagi khwahish.
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Jazib Kamalvi
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Varsha M 07 October 2020

Beautiful emotional words. Very well written sir. Thank-you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 October 2020

Dear Varsha M! Thanks for your words.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 03 April 2020

! بہت خوب سر Loved reading the poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 April 2020

بہت شکریہ Jagdish Singh Ramana gi.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2019

Teri yadon men zindagi paon, roz andaz e now bana laon. Meri tasweer mat banana tum, he yahi meri aakhiri khwahish..........most impressive. A brilliant poem is astutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 October 2019

Dear Poet! Your words really support me. Thanks for your nice comment.

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