Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Aaja Keh Adhoori Hai Mohabbat Ki Kahani! Comments

Rating: 5.0

gahra tha bahot ishq ke daryaooN ka paani
main Doob gayee paani meN naadaan divaanii

kuch sufHe abhee likhne ko baaqi haiN mire dost
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Aarzoo Mehek
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M Asim Nehal 22 February 2019

Dil ko chooNe wali nazm hai, badi dil kash andaz mein bayan ki hai aapne " Ek Adhuri Kahani" Shayad is kahani ka Adhura Hissa kahin aur kahani mein mil jaye....

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Akhtar Jawad 18 June 2018

My poem The Incomplete Love Story is a translation of this beautiful Ghazal.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 July 2016

Hi Mehak, Loved reading the gazal again and again. Exquisite. No more to say. Aa javo, ki sunaaoom tanhayee ke qissey. I am reminded of the famous song rendered by Noor Jehan Begum(?) : Kabhee tanhaaiyom mein Tumhari yaad aayagii Great work Aarzoo. Could we hear it in your voice?

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Talab . 07 May 2016

Lovely. kuch safhe abhi likhne ko baaqi hain..... beautiful couplet!

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Aarifa Almas 12 March 2016

Adhuri mohabbat ka izhaar bakhubi Kiya Hai aapne.. Great lines, great poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2016

HaNs haNs ke uThaya hai Sadaa bojh ghamoN ka Ai Aarzoo is dil ne kabhi haar na maanee An amazing ghazal, perfect all means, touching thoughts, beautiful words and lines flowing like a flooded river.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 25 February 2016

Beautiful ghazal.... Adhuri ye mohobbat ki kahani Adhuri se puri karain pyar ki kahani....thank you for sharing :)

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Mithilesh Yadav 24 February 2016

Lovely...... Loved it Ro lun maan bhar key ye aarmaan to hai.. Kambhaqqat namak ka pani hai... Kisi kaam ka bhi nhi.

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Seema Chowdhury 24 February 2016

Beautiful and very expressive.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 February 2016

Adhoori! Love; deep love! ! Full of respect with the laws of righteousness. Nice piece of work.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 24 February 2016

bahut khoob aarzooji...SubhanAllah... har roz suno aisi ghazal koi yehi hai ab is dil ki tamannah o aarzoo

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 24 February 2016

main chup thee magar chhup na saka dard-e gham-e dil aaNkhoN ne bata dee hai mire dil ki kahani.... behtereen kalmaat.....isi k mutaalakh humse bhi kuch sunleiN aankhonne meri mujhse kiye dhoke bahut hain kabhi humse wafaa ki na kabhi unse wafaa ki..

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 February 2016

Waahhhh kya baat hai... ye kambakht ankhein humesha dhokha de deti hai.

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Souren Mondal 24 February 2016

Jaate hai chod ke hume woh jinshe mohabaat kiye hum Par na jaane chod kyun jaate hai peeche us mohabaat ke nishaniyaan, Yaadein, tasveerein, aur kuch ankahi bateen... Har na khatam huyi mohabaat ki shayad yahi kahani hoti hai... Ek behtareen ghazal Arzoo.. Dil ko chu gayi.. Sukhriya.10/10...

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 February 2016

Pazeerai ka shukriya Souren. Ek ahoori kahani sabki zindagi ka hissa hoti hai...hai na Souren?

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Souren Mondal 24 February 2016

Sahi kaha Arzoo.. Shayad humari zindigi inhi adhuri kahanio se hi banti hai.. Kambakhat sirf iss baat ki afsoos hoti hai, ke na ye sirf hasati, na sirf rulati hai - kabhi haste haste ro parte te hai hum, to kabhi rote rote has de te hai..

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