Saturday, September 29, 2007

(aaj) Not In My Dream Comments

Rating: 4.8

The world now beholds
is not my dream,
The chaos, the turmoil
and the plague is not in my dream
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Edwin Alba Empestan
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T. Alfred Norman 23 January 2009

Your introspection disdains the outward appearance of a melancholy world, still we must dream of a brighter day, either in this life or the next my friend. This is by far your best poem! ! ! !

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Lungelo Mbatha 24 June 2008

wow! impressive- full of meaning, poignant also, a gr8 write! ! ! Lungelo

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Analou Pabalate 03 October 2007

dreaming..........all we had is to dream.......but sad to say some or many of our dreams will left dreams only........but? .........tnxs.

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Colin J... 29 September 2007

Loved the poem... Love the World, Love Everything, even the hateful, it's not their fault.. They have just lost sight of the Light... Colin J...

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