Friday, September 16, 2016

Aaj Banaam Kal: Today V/S Tomorrow (Hindi) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aaj kahe kal se,
Tu aaya kahan se?
Kal ne kaha aaj se,
Mujhse tu or tujhse main,
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Veer Dhiman
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Veer Dhiman 17 September 2016

Thanks.... To all..... #VD

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Veer Dhiman 17 September 2016

Thank u very much Rajnish Manga & Kumarmani Mahakul..... #VD

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Rajnish Manga 16 September 2016

Beautiful imagery and an interesting dialogue between different phases of time. Very thoughtful. Thanks, Veer.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2016

There is wonderful competition between aaj and kal I mean today and tomorrow. Very interestingly you have presented this poem is very pleasing.10

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