Friday, June 13, 2008

(aad) Red Planet Comments

Rating: 5.0

To the soaring infinite space
Like an idiot empty stupid shell
Comes a man who wants to be a president
Charading and mimicking empty promises
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Edwin Alba Empestan
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T. Alfred Norman 20 August 2008

If this poem was an arrow, you hit the mark. No one needs to guess what your point is. You convey the purpose powefully in your poetry.

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