Well done. Nothing wrong with rhyme; it helps the poem to 'swing along'. Rhyme brings music to poetry. Blank verse and free verse is nothing but an excuse for sloppiness.
I agree that it certainly keeps the poem 'swinging along', and they can be fun to read, but my ideal is to have both...a poem that 'swings' and one that inspires or has meaning.
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Well done. Nothing wrong with rhyme; it helps the poem to 'swing along'. Rhyme brings music to poetry. Blank verse and free verse is nothing but an excuse for sloppiness.
I agree that it certainly keeps the poem 'swinging along', and they can be fun to read, but my ideal is to have both...a poem that 'swings' and one that inspires or has meaning.