Wednesday, July 2, 2008

(aab) Vindictive - You Devil! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a mean sea hag, a witch, and a Jezebel
You were at fault of your deed and it’s obvious
That you did it as if you’re the only one
That can decide things for the group
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Edwin Alba Empestan
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Jester's P 07 July 2009

full of emotion...contrast on what i wouls concider as 'love poetry'...anyhow powerfull and beautifull work. please read my work, ***013...on friendship, somehow you will see the other way of fighting what is evil that sometimes is inside us. thanks

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 July 2008

a spate of curses! who is that villian? i feel it is rather difficult to write this kind of poem without losing the thread. with regards, sathya narayana

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 July 2008

a spate of curses! who is that villian? i feel it is rather difficult to write this kind of poem without losing the thread. with regards, sathya narayana

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