Tuesday, June 10, 2008

Aaah-Pathetic Comments

Rating: 4.9

After angers expressive leaving, angst arrives.
Planting seeds of more imagined trivial pursuits
Assembling argument to assault envisaged lies
Taking prisoner of tortured fact and truths
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Prionsías Ó Canáin
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Fay Slimm 26 October 2008

Aaaah Frank - this is one to read and read again, for all the young bloods who would do the same, were it not for your poetic ryhme. A great and wise verse.10 from Fay with hopes for more from you soon.

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, aryaindia 04 August 2008

It is said that the true breeding of a person is amply displayed in the midst of any argument/ quarrel. Your poem illustrates this sentiment only too well and perfectly too. Thanks. arya

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Fred Babbin 02 August 2008

Pretty neat. I like your warped thinking (it only looks warped) .

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Dawn Slanker 29 July 2008

A poet friend of mine once said: 'you know it's a good acrostic if it's not an obvious acrostic'...you've done great :) Great theme and skillfully rendered too.

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Original Unknown Girl 12 June 2008

Love the acrostic! a lot said in such a neat succinct little package! Like v much. HG: -) xx

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Ben Gieske 11 June 2008

You certainly packed each line with a lot of thought. Anger certaily leaves its trail of debris and becomes a trial of many things.

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