Aaah-Pathetic Comments

Aaaah Frank - this is one to read and read again, for all the young bloods who would do the same, were it not for your poetic ryhme. A great and wise verse.10 from Fay with hopes for more from you soon.

It is said that the true breeding of a person is amply displayed in the midst of any argument/ quarrel. Your poem illustrates this sentiment only too well and perfectly too. Thanks. arya

Pretty neat. I like your warped thinking (it only looks warped) .

A poet friend of mine once said: 'you know it's a good acrostic if it's not an obvious acrostic'...you've done great :) Great theme and skillfully rendered too.

Love the acrostic! a lot said in such a neat succinct little package! Like v much. HG: -) xx

You certainly packed each line with a lot of thought. Anger certaily leaves its trail of debris and becomes a trial of many things.