Saturday, July 6, 2013

(aaaa) .Water's Life And Seems Alive Comments

Rating: 4.7

Waves on the rocks a'crashing
In it human feet go splashing
And elsewhere in the swollen river
'gator tails go thrashing
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Yash Shinde 19 March 2014

great use of onomatopoeia and imagery, your poems flows as swiftly as a river and you've beautifully described its course.......lovely

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Idris Elasha 28 November 2013

This poem runs like water.

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Anoymous Fellow 08 November 2013

Impressive...

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Rick Adriolo 09 July 2013

Something so normal but so important.. A very realistic poem! Good write..

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Soulful Heart 08 July 2013

Didactic n gushing forth wprds that ripple ur senses...keep up...u r getting better bby each poem..

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John Shea 08 July 2013

A wow poem...I will drink the water one day. But like monk I wonder bout the germs in there. Pup

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Dave Walker 08 July 2013

A good poem, like it.

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 July 2013

Very nice poem on water'. It is lifeline after air. Preserving water is preserving life otherwise.......poem says a lot..

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Walterrean Salley 08 July 2013

Water—a most valuable resources, yet we are so trifling in our tendency to be wasteful of it. Water is life - just think about it the next time you are thirsty. Powerful poem. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2013

water is life. we need to preserve it. a powerful poem with beautiful write. great write. plz read my poem AUCTION when u get time

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