Waves on the rocks a'crashing
In it human feet go splashing
And elsewhere in the swollen river
'gator tails go thrashing
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Something so normal but so important.. A very realistic poem! Good write..
Didactic n gushing forth wprds that ripple ur senses...keep up...u r getting better bby each poem..
A wow poem...I will drink the water one day. But like monk I wonder bout the germs in there. Pup
Very nice poem on water'. It is lifeline after air. Preserving water is preserving life otherwise.......poem says a lot..
Water—a most valuable resources, yet we are so trifling in our tendency to be wasteful of it. Water is life - just think about it the next time you are thirsty. Powerful poem. Thank you.
water is life. we need to preserve it. a powerful poem with beautiful write. great write. plz read my poem AUCTION when u get time
great use of onomatopoeia and imagery, your poems flows as swiftly as a river and you've beautifully described its course.......lovely