(aaaa) .Water's Life And Seems Alive Comments

great use of onomatopoeia and imagery, your poems flows as swiftly as a river and you've beautifully described its course.......lovely

This poem runs like water.

Impressive...

Something so normal but so important.. A very realistic poem! Good write..

Didactic n gushing forth wprds that ripple ur senses...keep up...u r getting better bby each poem..

A wow poem...I will drink the water one day. But like monk I wonder bout the germs in there. Pup

A good poem, like it.

Very nice poem on water'. It is lifeline after air. Preserving water is preserving life otherwise.......poem says a lot..

Water—a most valuable resources, yet we are so trifling in our tendency to be wasteful of it. Water is life - just think about it the next time you are thirsty. Powerful poem. Thank you.

water is life. we need to preserve it. a powerful poem with beautiful write. great write. plz read my poem AUCTION when u get time