(aaaa.) Mankind In Dreamland Comments

you created a web of imagery, illusions in this piece, you beautifully explained things beyond natural......great wrk dear

Emphatically articulated unity of words. I like it!

A fantastic professional writing.

excellently written..enjoyed it

I enjoy the imagery in this poem and would love to see it developed even more.

beautifully written!

I love the imagery you created in this nightmare...and dont forget to add tarantula with butterfly wings hahaha... yes we better be beauty blind for that...because in real life, sometimes beautiful human, and humankind look nice but hidden inside just worse nightmare than you can get! ..i like this poem Zaynub! _Soul

Nay, Avoid ridding the backs of Nightmares From thy Stallions crazed Haram.... I love poems about dreams weather by day or by night This be great poem a fanciful write! ! !

Nay.... Avoid ridding the backs of Nightmares from thy stallions crazed Haram.... I love poems about dreams weather by day or by night, a fanciful write indeed! ! ! !

lovely a combination of scary and beautiful. good imagery

your imagination and used imagery is beyond my thought so nice

very creative with imagery

I love the imagery you use in this poem. Very great job.

Great poem about dreams - some good, some bad. Very imaginative write, enjoyed reading.

This is a lovely poem! Dreams scary and dreams rosy, they make up our nights besides our daydreams that extent into the night! ! But without them, how barren life would be! ! Enjoyed reading this! !

I am a chef and sometimes I remember a dream for a new dish. Sometimes my nightmares come true and my job becomes harder for the youth that teach.

Superb images and well crafted Takes you to fantasyland........................................: O)

so I just heave a sigh by your leave my leave and yours my friend.

zaynub well written piece, nicely did it nice theme too

Nice imagery! ! beautiful verse...thought provoking... great job zaynub....