Wednesday, February 13, 2008

Aaa) You Never Read My Eyes (Words You Will Never Read) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The end it came too soon,
I thought the day had come
When valentines would have some semblance of meaning
It was destined not to be
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Bill Smith
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Jurietta Duraan 23 March 2008

Captivating, full of emotion and soul.... absolutely beautiful. Thank You...it is perceived to be cliche when we refer to the eyes being the window to our souls...however, truth cannot be cliched....

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Michelle Evans 18 February 2008

I am speechless, I think I might cry. Well done.

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Broken Peaces 13 February 2008

A poem full of feeling, well penned and well thought out piece of work Bill, worth more than I can give 10 Chris

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