Monday, October 20, 2014

Aa Laut Chalen Phir Gharon Mein Comments

Rating: 5.0

Insan ka dam ab ghutne laga in nafrat ki deewaron mein,
Aa titli bun kar baithein kahin hum door kahin gulzaron mein.
Hum urte phirein panchi bun kar aa lori sunaun tujhe chanda,
Keyun maut ka hum deedar karein in wahshat ke bazaron mein.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2014

Wah an inspiring poem against warring factions. Kyah shaer ghazal refrain khoob! Pls coment my latest poem if u know english.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 October 2014

Humanity is suffocating within the wall of hatred, let us sit far somewhere amid flowers to listen their call..very interesting heart touching..calm and sober.. painted the grief of humanity in its best color thank you..man bhaa gayaa..tasalli mili ise padh kar

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 October 2014

Aapki kavita pyaari hai..... Kaash hum titli bun kar baithein kahin kaash Hum urte phirein panchi bun kar per eaisa toh khawaboon mein he hota hai.... Hum gharon mein he theekh hain...... I loved reading it twice.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

Suffocation is increasing, peace of mind is decreasing, the poem is a true picture of our vulnerable society.

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