A4) Unwrap Yourself (Moments When We Felt As One) Comments

Bill, This is indeed a discovery. To find a poem so eloquent, so honest and so wonderfully emotional is rare. The ability see reality from the others perspective difficult. Great work of art this poem is. Warm regards, Anita

Bill what a beautifull and tragic poem, it is so honest and so piercing. Who is she, may I ask? Read Brian Patten's 'doubt shall not put an end to you' it will remind you of the time when the love was new, vibrant and naughty! Mick

Bill, this is a fabulous write. You lead the reader's mind on so many new and interesting paths. This one poem provides so much area for exploration and ideas for consideration. Thank you.